Create a fourth section of your statement titled Learning Outcome 4. Review your feedback on the chosen Marked First Draft of One Peer’s Paper, in addition to any guidance offered by your instructor. Revisit your early efforts at peer review to help you think (and write) about your development. Write about your peer review practice, making sure to explain how specific examples of your comments show your achievement of this learning outcome and any ongoing areas for growth (about 150-450 words).

I definitely know that my first draft was really rough. The concepts were there and once I got going I had a strong case, but my grammar was atrocious. That is something I seriously struggle with and I am constantly working to improve. I also struggled to format the paper correctly, to begin with. I think my issue is I like to write what I am thinking and I get going and then don’t go back and catch all the issues I make.

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